この詩はよくておもしろいとおもいます。そして、とても「accurate」です。 I really like the parallel structure that you used. I think it gives a sense of continuity to the poem, like the changing of the seasons. I also think it's interesting that you chose to use カタカナfor the descriptive words in the last lines. It definitely changes the feeling of the words, but I'm not sure how exactly to describe it.
とてもおもしろかったです。I like how you integrated the chapter about weather we just finished. I really like your poem; the ending had a very calming effect. いいです！
きれいなはいくです。きせつが四つとはいくが四つあります。ポエティクだとおもいます。でも、マークスさんはくまりとゆくを書きました。Cloudyとsnowはくもりとゆきだとおもいます。そして、メレタはえい語で何ですか。
ReplyDeleteすごい！ながくてきれいなポエムですね。でも、スズジイは何ですか。すずしいですか。My favourite part is the rhyming 1st and 3rd line with です in the middle each time. Nice touch.
ReplyDeleteマークスさんの好きなきせつは何ですか。
たいへんですね！
Deleteどうもありがとうございました！
（そして、きせつの中で、なつは一番すきなときですよ。）
この詩はよくておもしろいとおもいます。そして、とても「accurate」です。
ReplyDeleteI really like the parallel structure that you used. I think it gives a sense of continuity to the poem, like the changing of the seasons. I also think it's interesting that you chose to use カタカナfor the descriptive words in the last lines. It definitely changes the feeling of the words, but I'm not sure how exactly to describe it.
とてもおもしろかったです。I like how you integrated the chapter about weather we just finished. I really like your poem; the ending had a very calming effect. いいです！
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